Comments on: So, I finally wrote a poem… http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/ tweet, tweet Thu, 20 Nov 2008 17:08:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.4 by: Jessi http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6878 Tue, 28 Aug 2007 18:44:27 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6878 That was beautiful. Totally made me cry. That was beautiful. Totally made me cry.

]]> by: Barbara Noblog http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6867 Tue, 28 Aug 2007 14:30:24 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6867 Thank you. Thank you.

]]> by: atomic mama http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6845 Tue, 28 Aug 2007 04:06:02 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6845 This was lovely to read, thanks for sharing it. Glad you've got your legs back. Of course, they were always there - just trying to figure out how to walk 2 paths at once, perhaps. This was lovely to read, thanks for sharing it. Glad you’ve got your legs back. Of course, they were always there - just trying to figure out how to walk 2 paths at once, perhaps.

]]> by: Cavatica http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6789 Sun, 26 Aug 2007 22:15:27 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6789 This feels real, not flowery and fake. Thank you. This feels real, not flowery and fake. Thank you.

]]> by: christie http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6781 Sun, 26 Aug 2007 20:10:40 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6781 Just lovely. I'm there, with you. Just lovely. I’m there, with you.

]]> by: FDChief http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6755 Sat, 25 Aug 2007 20:12:21 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6755 I have to admit a fondness for poems that work with simple, anglophone words. You can keep the florid, romance-language talk. Light, dark, wind, stone. Words like rock, plain and unfinished, that catch and hold the light, faceting it and returning it in ways you don't catch until you've looked away and then back again. This poem is like that. I like it. I have to admit a fondness for poems that work with simple, anglophone words. You can keep the florid, romance-language talk. Light, dark, wind, stone. Words like rock, plain and unfinished, that catch and hold the light, faceting it and returning it in ways you don’t catch until you’ve looked away and then back again.

This poem is like that. I like it.

]]> by: Anne Marie http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6747 Sat, 25 Aug 2007 15:43:15 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6747 Not warm fuzzies, but full of real emotion. I too think it's great. Not warm fuzzies, but full of real emotion. I too think it’s great.

]]> by: Jacquie http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6740 Sat, 25 Aug 2007 12:28:21 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6740 What do you mean not great? LOVE. IT. What do you mean not great?

LOVE. IT.

]]> by: OmegaMom http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6723 Fri, 24 Aug 2007 23:00:06 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6723 Ah, that was lovely. I love it. Ah, that was lovely. I love it.

]]> by: wzgirl http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6722 Fri, 24 Aug 2007 22:51:34 +0000 http://thesingingbirdblog.com/2007/08/24/so-i-finally-wrote-a-poem/#comment-6722 That was so lovely. I could envision Bee's fingers in a sickle shape & you kissing them. Thank you for sharing this, SBird. That was so lovely. I could envision Bee’s fingers in a sickle shape & you kissing them. Thank you for sharing this, SBird.

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